hoshi's story

[wushy-chan]

hoshi is my character with a japanese name
so the story will go about me
and it will be like naruto and sasuke will appear in it
but hey !! a girl can have her dreams ha ^^
and mine will come true in this story
I'm a ninja and I'm sis from hazukashi and kakashi [this was an accident I wasn't supposed to be his sis but hazukashi --> the one I and my friend invented was a "hatake" and I forgot it so kakashi became my older brother it wasn't planned ><]
biography :
hoshi hatake ...
bio: youngest and only girl in the hatake-clan has cosmic blue hair ... [duh its me =P ] is kinda small and rly good with *kunai and shuriken *[little knifes]
age : 14



hazukashi hatake
bio: mid-bro not the oldest not the youngest
is good in genjutsu and caught 2 A-rank criminals they're now in jail
age:17



the one and only
kakashi hatake
bio : oldest brother he has the sharingan power ^^ and is good in all jutsu ... ><
age : 26 ^^ does freeze say


[I'm going to add some characters later ^^ from naruto and selfmade ones]
the story will come lol ><

[wushy-chan]

her clothes where ripped, her hair was a mess she had blood hanging everywhere she could not stand on her legs becuz her left was broken. with her last conscious being she crawled to the konoha poort where everything went black for her eyes...


*biep biep biep biep biep biep ...*
*huh ... where am I ?? ... am I death ?*
she is in a stable life circumstance ...
will she wake up soon ??
we think she'll atleast stay asleep for an hour .
realy ?
*hoshi opens her eyes*
k...k...kak ka ..sh...i ??
kakashi went to the bed
"hoshi-chan are you alright ??"
hoshi opened her eyes slowly ...
"wha... where am I ?? why is my leg zo heavy and my head hurts"
she saw two nurses
"am I in a hospital ... WHY ??"
the nurse said
"I thought she wouldn't remember anything, its too soon she'll probably remember later"
kakashi went to hoshi
"dear *chiisana no hoshi ... get well soon sis ^^ I gtg but hazukashi will come visit you =)"
kakashi huged her kissed her on the forehead and went away
"you need some rest dear go back to sleep it'll do you well"
the nurse said and she went away
hoshi went lying on her bed and looked to the ceiling and starts thinking ...
what the hell happend ... why can't I remember ?
she felt the big bandage on her head and saw the bandages on her leg and arm, she started to feel pain ...
"auch ... my head"
after a few minutes having pain she felt asleep ...

hoshi stood in a dark place surrounded by trees
"SSHHHHH"
hoshi turned around
what'the ... AAAAAH ...

*chiisana no hoshi : little star
[will be continued =P ]

[tyleefreak]

cool!!
altho i dont get the story (jet)...

[wushy-chan]

yay !! part 2 of my fanfic ^^



she felt a hard punch in her stomach and landed on the ground …
“wha … who R you ??”
she saw 3 big ninja’s with a head protector with a sign she didn’t know
Hoshi crawled up
thinks : these guys look pretty dangerous … and where the hell is my TEAM !!
the head of the 3 ninja’s named : kotou
kotou : “what ?? you don’t know us ?? then we’ll have to punish you little girl …
hoshi : *gasp* *hoshi crawled backwards and got up*
kotou : “so your going to fight eeh …”
hoshi !! hoshi !! hoshi !! hoshi !! hoshiiiiiiiii
things went unclear and dark …
hoshi opend her eyes and saw hazukashi …
hoshi : hazukashi-san !! what are you doing you’re hurting me !!
hazukashi released hoshi’s arm
hazukashi : you were acting weird !! I had to do something …
hoshi : … well dear brother , that’s what “dreaming” is called …
hazukashi : ooh right … well uuhm >< hehe srry !
hoshi : its alright … I was dreaming about what happened to me … I could
remember …
then kakashi came in the room
kakashi : hii lil’ sis !! how ya doing today ^^
hoshi : well … better after hazu-san shaked me …
hazukashi: … teehee ><
kakashi slapped his hand to his face … “he’ll never learn”
kakashi : look hoshi, I got you flowers your favourites
hoshi : ooh onii-chan* !! thank you ^^
they all heard a scream
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
and it got louder and louder, then the door flew open and a cute
blonde girl ran in. She screamed
SAVE ME !! he wants to kill me !!
she hid below hoshi’s bed
suddenly a mysterious guy who’s face was hid behind a large jacket and
little sunglasses. the guy said :
I aint gonna kill you abi so you can come out there below the bed …
abi came out :
no shino please I didn’t killed the bug at purpose !! it was being annoying around my head so I … squished it …
shino : that poor bug wasn’t death yet, he was in a horrible pain …
abi : I’m srry shino !!! please don’t kill me …
shino : tsuh …
and shino walked out.
abi : ppfew
hoshi : … killed a bug ??
abi : ooh right … srry jeah don’t you guys know shino aburame ?
hoshi : no …
hazukashi : I think I heard of him …
kakashi : me to …
abi : well he’s in my team and he “”loves” his buggies, and I wasn’t thinking and I squished one when he was right next to me then he said what did you do !! and I ran and he followed me.
hoshi : love bugs ? ieuw !! ooh btw I’m hoshi ^^ and that are my bro’s hazukashi-san and kakashi-san
abi : I’m abi ^^ nice to meet you
kakashi : well we gtg, bye abi ^^ pleasure to meet you
and kakashi and hazukashi went away
abi : I gtg also, btw kakashi is hot !!
hoshi : hahaha onii-chan hot >< … hey, can I walk with you I’m lonely and bored ?
abi : okay sure ^^
hoshi took her crutches and went with abi.
they were talking about stuff and other stuff but then hoshi saw the most handsome guy she ever saw …
abi :… and the she said “NO WAY” hahaha … huh ?? hoshi ?? whats wrong where are you staring at ??
then abi saw the guy, and she said :
oooh hehehe at him
hoshi : *blushes* no eehm I was staring at … uuhm at the … uuhm uuhm … OMG he’s
SO cute !!, whats his name ??
abi : that’s sasuke …
hoshi : sa…su…ke ?? <3 OMG abi I’m in love ><
abi : teehee ><
hoshi fell with her crutches right in front of sasuke, sasuke looked at what happened …
hoshi : *gets totally red* eeh >< OMG !! *turns around and is so embarrassed*
sasuke : uuhm hi there … what’s wrong ?
hoshi : I, eeh I gtg *thinks* geez why me !! :’( uuhm I gtg abi …
abi: huh ?? hoshi ? …
sasuke : huh ?
abi : nevr mind …
hoshi arrived in her room
hoshi : OMG :’( why does this have to happen with me *cries*
hoshi went in her bed and hid below her blankets.
“uuhuuh uhuuu uu uhuuh huhuuu …”
then she heared a voice.
uuhm hellow ?? what’s wrong here ?
hoshi looked over the blanket
hoshi : huh ?? sasuke ? what are you doing here ?
sasuke : how do you know my name ?
hoshi : I … uuhm *blushes* abi-chan told me ^^’ so what R u doing here
*blushes very hard*
sasuke : I believe you dropped something
hoshi : rly ? what ?
sasuke : you’re head protector *he showed it*
hoshi : *she felt in her hair* gone ! arrigato-domo ^^ thank you
sasuke : well you know my name but you didn’t tell yours
hoshi : *blushes* uuhm I’m hoshi hatake …
sasuke : oh ? rly so you’re kakashi-sensei younger sis I’m uchiha, sasuke uchiha
hoshi : jep I’m his sis ^^ uchiha ?? … wauw , sooo …
then the nurse came in
nurse : hoshi its time for your threatment ^^ I’m srry boy but you have to go now
sasuke : okay bye hoshi-chan
hoshi: bye …
nurse : okay dear lets go.

[tyleefreak]

nice!!
i would write it more like this "......" said hoshi
an stead of : hoshy: "......"
get what im trying to say??

btw very subtle the sasuke thingie ^^

[freeze]

good story and kakashi is 26 years old

[wushy-chan]

freeze said:

good story and kakashi is 26 years old

ooh rly ?? thanx
I'm going to change ^^ how do you know ?? [did I missed something in naruto ?? ]

[wushy-chan]

okay now here comes the change =P srry peeps XD its kinda confusing
here we go :

“okay dear we’re ready here ^^ you can go to your room now” the nurse said
“uuugh … I hate this things” hoshi said while almost falling with her crutches.
hoshi heard kakashi and hazukashi talking about her and she went a little closer to hear what they we’re saying.
“should we tell hoshi ?? I don’t know she’ll be totally hurt … and she’s still sick” hoshi heard.
Huh?? Hurt?? What do they have to tell me?? Hoshi thought
“but we have to tell her … it will be even worse if she found out via via that taiyo died
it’s just …”
hazukashi saw hoshi standing back the wall “kakashi shut up !! she heard …”
what ? Hoshi heard ssspoonit !!
hoshi fell at the ground she felt so weird like her whole world crushed.
“Taiyo died ??” kakashi looked at hazukashi and they ran to hoshi.
Hoshi started crying very soft “tell me its not true … Taiyo can’t be death she just can’t” hoshi smile “she rly can’t I know she’ll be walking here in the hospital in no time she’ll come for me and bring me flowers or something !! she can’t be death !!” she looked at kakashi “ne ??”
“I’m so sorry Hoshi … we realy are”
hoshi stopped smiling “so she really is death ??” her tears came back “my best friend is go…” she couldn’t finish the sentence and started crying like hell.
hazukashi hugged her to make her stop but it didn’t help cuz her best friend was gone.
kakashi brought her to her room when she stopped crying.
sasuke stood in the hall looking what was going on and who was screaming that loud he saw hoshi got dragged to her room.

kakashi put hoshi down on her bed and hugged her “thanx onii-chan” hoshi said
she felt so sad. how could taiyo leave her here.
“hoshi, I gtg now hazukashi has to show you something and I’ll come check on you when I’m done with my mission, ne ?” kakashi said
“okay” hoshi looked at hazukashi… “so what were you going to show me ?” she said
“I’m sorry hoshi but there is something else” hazukashi took some sort of a lil screen like a note book and put it on “Umi (hoshi’s other teammate)recorded this while you were K.O.” hazukashi said.
hoshi watched the screen the tears jumped in her eyes when she saw taiyo telling that
she never liked the team and hated it being always with them and detested the stupid missions “I’ll never forget … that you guys … were such losers” hoshi saw Taiyo telling that stuff she turned her face crying away “ENOUGH !!! “ she screamed “NO MORE !! it hurts so badly !! why !! why taiyo !! she became my best friend !! how could she …”
hoshi was crying again. “Hoshi I …” hazukashi said “NO !! that’s not taiyo !! not the taiyo I used to know” tears were drippin of her face “NO !!” “I want to be alone now …” she said “okay, if there is anything you need … I’ll be there” hazukashi said “its okay hazu-chan …” hazukashi walked out the door feeling bad hurting his lil sis but he had no choice she’d found out its better that she knows it now.he heard hoshi crying and that hurted him …

hoshi was crying on her bed with her face in her pillow, she cried whole night and fell a sleep after whole night crying.
when she woke up she found kakashi and hazukashi sleeping with their heads on her bed.
“aww …” hoshi thought
the nurse came quietly in “you have very sweet brothers they were here whole night watching you” the nurse whispered “now you need this injection” she walked towards hoshi “look away for a sec dear” nurse said
hoshi turned her head and saw a pic off her team …
“Taiyo …” she softly said tears came up again. “what you said dear ?” the nurse said
“no … nothing” she felt a sting. “hold on almost done sweet” the nurse said she put the needle out of hoshi’s arm and told her to went in bed cuz she still needs some rest so hoshi went to bed “how could you …” she softly said and she putted the pic of her team down.

[Atfiel]

the life of a nina is hard..


(and i see u got straight to the point with sasuke -_-) .. ^_^ very nice story..

[wushy-chan]

atfiel said:

the life of a nina is hard..


(and i see u got straight to the point with sasuke -_-) .. ^_^ very nice story..

hahaha !!
lol yeah I <3 sasuke !!
xD
*listens song sang by the voice actor of sasuke*
haha lol

[wushy-chan]

hoshi woke up by hearing voices outside her room.
“what are you doing here !? I haven’t smashed any bug !! I swear !! and if I did while sitting on it it wasn’t on purpose !! I SWEAR !!” someone screamed “oi , easy there I don’t come to beat u or something …” an other voice said hoshi heard sighing and smiled, abi had another “fight” with shino about flies. It made hoshi laugh and forget all her sadness. suddenly someone knocked on the door. “uuhm yeah ?” she was scared by her own voice, since it was almost gone. She remembered the nurse telling her not to talk that much cuz of her voice. They knocked again. “uugh” hoshi groaned. she took her crutches and got with trouble by the door and opened it. “srry , I can’t tak much” she tried to say. she saw abi-chan and shino “hii” she waved and made the sign come in and then got back to her bed with help from abi and shino. “so … why are you here shino ?” abi-chan asked, suddenly she looked scared “ooh no hoshi !! you haven’t smashed a bug did you ?! shino !! you aren’t going to hurt a invalid person are you ?! “ she was totally freaking and it made hoshi laugh. shino sighed “I know hoshi for a long time I also knew taiyo and I also trusted her …” he said” Hoshi looked down, just when she forgot about taiyo. the 3 talked for a long time till the nurse came in and told abi and shino to leave cuz hoshi needed rest. She went lying on her side and saw the picture she putted down earlier she took the pic and looked at it. hoshi didn’t realize someone was coming in the room, she was too consentraded to the pic. “how could you …” she whispered. tears came down her cheek … “how would umi be now ? taiyo was his best friend to …” she knew Umi he’d probably be on his bed cursing taiyo , thining she could hear him , telling her he’ll get her back “that was Umi …” she tought, she smiled true her tears and turned to her back and suddenly she saw someone one the room. she scared that much she fell from her bed “aah …” she screamed although it should be screaming it sounded more like she was choking in water. Hoshi felt she got cought right before she hit the ground. the mistyrious person laughed “what happened to ur voice ?” Hoshi recognized the voice it was sasuke “sa …” a finger got placed on her mouth “I heard your voice is pretty bad so you shouldn’t talk” sasuke said, Hoshi nodded and smiled. sasuke brought a white lily in a vase it was a beautiful flower and he had something else “here …” he said while giving something packed to hoshi. She opened it …
she had to laugh badly, there was a block note and a pen with a note “use these till your voice is better “ Hoshi smiled and wrote something on the paper. Sasuke wanted to see what she was writing but she pulled away. she gave a paper to sasuke with the subscription “ read the next paper when you’re outside “ then Hoshi putted a little folded paper in sasuke’s chestpocket (yep for now he has one xD) suddenly the nurse came in and took hoshi for a pedicure. Sasuke left the hospital, outside he saw Abi-chan in discussion with shino about a flower with apparently a bug on it. Sasuke rolled his eyes
wwhen abi saw him she yelled his name “sasukeee !? you come from hoshi ? ne ? yes you did I knew haha” did she said something ? “no, she has no voice how can she ?” sasuke replied “ooh … right” abi said “But ! …” abi looked up “she gave me this and told me to read it when I was outside the hospital “ sasuke said while he took the lil paper and showed it. abi’s eyes grew big “ oooooh !! “ she sneered the paper out off sasuke’s hand and read it “ ooh emm geee !!” her eyes grew even bigger and she smiled evilish to sasuke the ran away with the paper “Cyaaaaaa …” she yeld after. shino laughd seeing sasuke standing there don’t knowing what just happened “ so … don’t you want to know whats on the paper ? “ shino asked. sasuke came back to earth “ spoonit !! the paper “ he ran after abi trying to find her …


uugh xD its so late I'm going to bed !
yeah hoshi is a rly sensitive person xD and abi seems kinda dumb ne ? =P lol