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Post by Atfiel on Jul 11, 2007 1:10:34 GMT 1
ooo.. good idea, YAY i get to follow Aear story somewhere else.. i'll join here soon.. ;d ;d
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Post by Pink Pearl Voice! Sakura-chan on Jul 11, 2007 5:41:05 GMT 1
I wanna join!!!!
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Post by The~Quenchiest on Jul 11, 2007 19:06:48 GMT 1
Thats great! The more the better. I'll leave my story where it is now and you all can join in from there. Also check out Aear's Story! I will be posting new stuff soon!!
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Post by Pink Pearl Voice! Sakura-chan on Jul 12, 2007 7:48:38 GMT 1
Ok! Let me write.
Name: Kagoshi/Kago. Age: (What age is yours? ;D ) (I'll post more later..)
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Post by The~Quenchiest on Jul 12, 2007 18:31:14 GMT 1
My characters are 17
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Post by Pink Pearl Voice! Sakura-chan on Jul 13, 2007 5:53:02 GMT 1
((Ok, then my character is 16.)) Nation,Bending: Fire, Firebending.Even though she is fire nation,she does not care about the war and is friendly to every Nation, not just fire. You can kinda call her a Rebel , lol . Personality: Sarcastic. She has a strong sense of doing your OWN thing.Once you get past that, she is lovable,calm,and happy.She usually cries when no one is looking .................. Looks: Her eyes are amber.She has long black hair with a bun on top.On her bun is a gold ribbon with a small fire nation emblem in front.She has a poufy red top, with even poufy-er pants.She has gold earings and gold bracelets.Her shoes are dark red, like the tips of her shirt and pants. Over all her clothes she wears a black cape, with a hood that covers most of her face.She uses Kung-Fu a lot, carrys dark red Throwing Knives, and is 5'6.
(Whew.....story coming soon!)
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Post by The~Quenchiest on Jul 13, 2007 20:36:48 GMT 1
Thats a great start. But uh, I think only members of the royal family wear the fire crest. Even though we arent including the main characters, I dont want it to be like they dont exist. I want to keep it as close to the creators vision as possible...just with out own ideas in it.
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Post by Pink Pearl Voice! Sakura-chan on Jul 14, 2007 16:51:20 GMT 1
Ok, I changed it to "On her bun is a gold ribbon with a small fire nation emblem in front." Is that good?
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Post by The~Quenchiest on Jul 15, 2007 5:25:19 GMT 1
Yeah thats fine.
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Post by Pink Pearl Voice! Sakura-chan on Jul 15, 2007 17:51:26 GMT 1
Ok... my story then.... (It's in first-person): My name is Kagoshi. I was born on June 15, to a wealthy family of firebenders.My father is a war strategist.My mother was a pretty earthbender.It was she who taught me the cruelness of the war, an made me who I am today. I quickly adjusted to wealthy life and "connnections". When I was five, my father found out of my mother's teachings. He too believed the war was a little off, but he feared for my mother's (and my) safety. My father forbade her to teach, and started giving me top-notch firebending classes instead. My mother still taught me, but in the darkness of night.Then, the day of my tenth birthday, someone found out of my mother's teachings. A fire nation general named Enamai came to my house along with three others in black robes. I greeted Enamai like usual, smiling and waving. Then, he greeted my father, and told him they were here on serious matters. They had a private chat. My father came back white and shaking. He hugged my mother, kissed her, and told her he loved her.Then, my faher backed away slowly. Then, I realised what they were gonna do. Enamai was gonna kill my mother.I ran over and hugged her. "Mom..." I whispered. "I love you,and will love you, forever.." she smiled sadly. Then "HE" came over. He looked coldly at me, and when I refused to move, flung me over the length of the room. I landed on the cold floor and slowly blacked out as intense heat washed over me............. Now, six years later, I am on my father's ship, heading to the Earth Kingdom. When we arrive at our mansion,I quickly pull on my mother's cloak and head to the highest room. Then, I scrabble up the roof onto the highest spire. I stand there, and watch the ocean waves crash,and let the wind blow through my hair. I then pledge to get revenge on the Nation, I was born into, the Nation that murdered my mom, the Nation that then shunned me in society. And this is where my story begins...........
((Did this make you wanna cry...?)) ((AHHHHHHH!!! I just read your story and saw how alike they were!!!!EEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!))
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Post by The~Quenchiest on Jul 16, 2007 2:05:20 GMT 1
Nice begining. I'm going to post one more thing that I have already posted for my story since it leaves it open for others to join.
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Post by The~Quenchiest on Jul 16, 2007 2:16:20 GMT 1
Aear rode swiftly as silent tears rolled down her cheeks. She was not angry at Nar. He didn’t know her troubled past. She had once again been taken over by her sorrow. Nar was a nice guy, why did she have to go and run off like that? When the town had vanished behind her, she tugged on Terra’s reins, bringing her down to a walk. She did not look up where she was going but instead let her head sag onto her chest, swinging slightly side to side. Her stomach growled again and she remembered her unfinished task of going to the market. As they came across a tree covered area, Aear pulled Terra over and tied her to a low hanging branch while she walked off to find some water. Not five minutes after she left, Nar and Orod caught sight of Terra and came to a halt. He did not dismount just yet but looked around, hoping to see Aear. With no such luck, he jumped off and brought Orod over by Terra. “You two be nice now.” he said, giving them both a pat. Turning around, he wondered where she could be. He looked down, noticing light footprints in the dirt. Without a second thought, he followed them. Aear knelt by a stream only a minute or so from where she left Terra. She slowly bended a stream of water into her water pouch and capped it. She then let out a heavy sigh. She wanted to go back and apologize to Nar but didn’t have the guts. A sudden wave of anger washed over her and she flung out her arm, causing a great wave of water to rise up in the air and fall back with a splash. Aear remained dry, having bended the water around her. “Are you alright?” said a familiar voice. Aear spun around to she Nar standing there, soaking wet. “Oh!” she said in a shocked voice. She quickly got to her feet and went to him. He was laughing softly and flinging water from his hands. “Waterbender, eh?” he said smiling. Aear blushed. “Yeah. Here, let me get that.” she said, noticing his useless attempt to dry himself. She put out her hands and made a swift pulling motion back towards her. Drops of water slowly pulled themselves from Nar clothes, forming a mid-sized ball in front of the two. She held it there, watching Nar over the top of it. He stared back at her. Then, he slowly reached out to the ball of water dancing between them. Aear’s heart began to beat faster as his hand grew closer and closer to the water. At contact, Aear gasped and the water fell with a splash at their feet. Both jumped a bit but it was Aear who turned away, feeling like an idiot. Nar was laughing behind her. She didn’t turn to look at him but instead was mentally yelling at herself. ‘You’re such an idiot! Why did you do that?!’ she was thinking. “Hey,” Nar said, putting a hand on her shoulder, “don’t worry about it.” She quickly wiped her eyes which had started to water again and turned back to him. A comforting smile was on his face that warmed her insides and made her smile as well. “Why did you come after me?” she asked after a moment of silence. A sly glint jumped into his eyes and he took a few steps back. “Well, I figured, once you found they were missing of course, you might want these back.” He said, pivoting around with two bracelets and a necklace hanging from his fingers. Aear’s eyes widened and she took in a sharp, quick breath. “Where did you find these?” she asked, walking over to him and taking the necklace from him. “I think they fell out of your bags when you left in such a hurry.” he replied. Aear had fastened the necklace around her neck. Her hands gently followed the chain down to the cerulean amulet. She gave Nar an apologetic look as she let the cool glass slip through her fingers. “I’m sorry, I just—” “No I’m sorry.” Nar cut in. He went over to her and took her arm. “I shouldn’t have called you a nomad.” he said as he slipped one of the bracelets over her slender wrist. He let it drop to her side and took the other arm. “I should have been more understanding.” he said, slipping the other bracelet over her wrist. This time, he held her hand in his, looking into her eyes and she into his. “But that’s what I am.” she whispered. “I have no home to go to, no friend to seek shelter with. I’ve never even been to my tribe!” she said a little more forcefully. There was now fury in her eyes. It was a fiery hate for the Fire Nation, for what they had done to her family. She pulled her hand from his. Her blonde hair flew out behind her, almost hitting Nar in the face, as she flung around. “The Fire Nation took my father, my mother. They’ve kept me from my home my whole life.” she spat bitterly, shaking slightly from rage. Behind her, Nar’s face was lined with worry. Aear turned back to see the last signs of this on his face. “What’s wrong?” she said, voice relaxed again. Nar dismissed his worry as best he could and put on a forced smile. “Nothing.” he said. Aear looked as though she was going to question him further but she seemed to take this lie for now. She sighed and went over to him. “I’m sorry I got angry.” she said, reaching out and touching his forearm. He seemed to recoil ever so slightly at her touch. He looked down at her hand, briefly mesmerized by the bracelet once again. “Shall we go then?” she asked, cheerful once more. Nar looked up. “Yes lets.” he said. Together they walked back to Terra and Orod. It seemed the two had made friends. They looked like they had been playing tag around the tree trunk. It had gotten them both tangled in their ropes and looking very uncomfortable but content with each other none-the-less. Nar and Aear made quick work untangling them, mounted, and rode off, the sun high in the sky. They talked the rest of the day, telling stories about their past, joking and teasing like they had been friends forever. The sun soon vanished, leaving the horizon lightly kissed with colors of red, orange and pink from its last dying rays. Finding a good spot, the two made camp. When Aear asked him to start the fire, Nar seemed rather unnerverd by it, like she had said something wrong. Realizing his own mistake, he blamed it on joking and lit the fire with as much difficulty as he could. For a time his actions bothered her but when the two lay down next to each other and began to star gaze, the event was cast from her mind. Sleep was soon upon them. Aear watched as Nar rolled onto his side, facing away from her. Not fully aware of her own actions, she scooted over to him. At her touch, he turned his head to look at her. She flashed him a bashful smile but he did not recoil. Instead, he rolled over the other way and wraped his arm around her waist, pulling her close. Aear gave a content sigh, feeling happier then she had in a long time.
(I'm sure most of you have already read this but for those who havent, here it is. It has a touch extra on it to make it easier for you guys to add your characters.)
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Post by Pink Pearl Voice! Sakura-chan on Jul 16, 2007 4:45:26 GMT 1
(( 1.Who's Nar? There are alot of spaces missing between the first story and the second....but is it supposed to be that way??!! 2. I just had the wierdest idea...What if our stories crossed?! But then it would kinda roleplay.. but still.. ))
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Post by Atfiel on Jul 16, 2007 4:56:07 GMT 1
TM U BETRAYED THE FIRE NATION Lol.. nice story.. ;d ;d i'll join soon..
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Post by The~Quenchiest on Jul 16, 2007 21:48:39 GMT 1
Uhh Nar is another character I introduced. And what do you mean a lot of space is missing? If you go back to the first page of the thread the story is there, it will fill you in. And we kinda agreed to turning this into a roleplay.
Yeah! Atfiel!
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Post by Pink Pearl Voice! Sakura-chan on Jul 16, 2007 23:23:44 GMT 1
((Oh! I thought you said you DIDNT rp!))
((Atfiel, yeah I DID betray the FN.... and I feel GREAT about it LOL!))
I strode into town by myself. I couldn't believe my eyes.Everything was sooo simple! "And brownish-green...." I sighed as I closed my eyes and took of my hood. I felt kinda relieved to feel the cool air on my face. I walked to a small shop. There was a shopkeeper there, sweeping the floor. I put 2 coppper coins on the counter. "One jasmine tea please," I said quietly. When he asked how I wanted that, I replied,"With cream, hold the sugar,and add a pinch of cinnamon.Please." When he gave me the drink, I thanked him and exited.Then, I found a nice spot under a tree. I sat down quietly and stared at my tea.I thought about my trip here.
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Post by The~Quenchiest on Jul 17, 2007 0:47:35 GMT 1
Well I dont usually like to, but if we just keep to our own characters and dont bring in any of them that are in the show I'm fine with it. So yes, we will be roleplaying in this board.
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Post by Pink Pearl Voice! Sakura-chan on Jul 17, 2007 0:56:03 GMT 1
Woo Hoo!!
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Post by Atfiel on Jul 19, 2007 4:35:05 GMT 1
BETRAYERS.. IM GONNA TURN U ALL IN!! but u guys are lucky that u write such great stories.. so im gonna make an exception.. -_-'' ^^
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Post by The~Quenchiest on Jul 19, 2007 18:01:25 GMT 1
*dances* Yeah good story writing!! Are you gonna join soon or what Atfiel? *taps foot impatiently*
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